Question: A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
Governments and local bodies always try their best to allure companies to built factories in their localities. This is because they understand how important a factory can be for the growth of a community. I strongly support the announcement by the company to build a factory in my community for the following reasons.
Firstly, they provide a large number of jobs to the people living in the community. The unemployment rate is very high in my community despite the fact that most of the individuals are qualified enough to work in a factory. Due to non availability of work in my community, most of the qualified personnel leave for places where factories are located. Though they are able to find work in far away places, they are not left with enough money to save and send some money back home. Building a factory in my locality would help people find work in the locality itself and they can commute to the work right from their home. This way, they will be able to save money and improve the lives of their families.
Secondly, building a factor can also spur economic growth within the community by giving rise to other related factories and shops to support the manpower working the factories. For example, if the company is building a manufacturing plant, it is required to build other factories that would supply the raw materials to the manufacturing plant. Moreover, the infrastructure needed to support these factories would also be built by the governing bodies there by benefiting both the factories as well as the community. Other small business will also have to be established in order to provide services to the factories as well as to the people working in the factories. Thus, building a factory can be a boon to my community as economic activity will be instigated.
However, some might argue that a factory can have detrimental effects on the community as well. This can be in the form of noise pollution, air pollution, or water pollution. It is also possible that the factory will be dealing with hazardous materials like in the case of making fertilizers or working with radioactive material. But, given the developments in technology and the safety measures prescribed by governing bodies that have to be strictly adhered to by the factory, one can assured that all the harmful effects will be handled appropriately and will be nullified so that no harm is caused to the community.
To sum it all, building a factory will prove to be a boon to my community which is suffering from high unemployment rate by generating a large number of jobs directly and indirectly. It will also spur economic growth whilst taking caring of all the possible malignant ramifications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...owing reasons. Firstly, they provide a large number of jobs to the people living in the commun...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... there by benefiting both the factories as well as the community. Other small business wil...
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Line 10, column 136, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...om high unemployment rate by generating a large number of jobs directly and indirectly. It will a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8847826087 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82613628719 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436956521739 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3895391588 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.35 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177137724872 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706331225835 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604265202207 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120155602401 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613669410948 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.