In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In

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In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

In an organisation, everyone shows fervor to contribute for the development of the organisation. While some people are considered eminent in making the contribitions, others are considered as inconcequential. The prompt suggests that in any field of inquiry, novices are more likely to make important contributions than an expert. I disagree with the prompt and feel that experts are more adept in making important contributions than a dabbler for the following reasons.

Firstly, one can refute a claim that a person learns more during theri actual practice of their profession than they do during their college education. Thus, the experince people gain while working plays a pivotal role in making important contributions in the fields of inquiry. While practicing a profession, people learn passively rather than actively wlhich is in contrast to how they learn during their college days. People learn as they are presented with various scenarios that cannot be anticipated. Having encountered the multitude of scenarios for the first time, they contemplate on resolving the issues they face, plan accordingly and execute their plans. It is possible that they make mistakes in the process. However, it is this hands on approach that makes them learn new aspects which will equip them to make important contributions in the future. On the other hand, a dilettante, having his knowledge limited only texts, will not have such practical experiene that would facilitate him to make important contributions. And one can gain practical experience only after working in the system for quite some time. Therefore, in any field of inquiry, it is an expert who can make important contributions and not a beginner.

Secondly, having equipped with invaluable experience, an expert will have developed a sound judgement that plays a crucial role in making important decisoins. Whereas, a beginner will have a critical analysis that is naive and inchoate. For example, let us take the case of Astronomy. In such a field of inquiry, it is mandatory to possess indepth knowledge of theoritical aspects of Astronomy as well as the practical implications of those theoritical concepts. An expert, having been in the field for quite some time, possesses the critical judgement of various arcane phonamena they encounter while analysing the myriad of information they muster from various scientific equipment. However, a novice will have to flounder his way while rifling through esoteric data.

However, in the realms of our discussion, we cannot ignore a few exceptions. There can be some cases where a beginner more makes important contributions than an expert. This is possible because a beginner's mind is not completely formed and there is a possibility for him to start thinking in a different direction rather than thinking conventionally. This is especially true in the field of Technology where we see freshly graduated students or even college dropouts making it big in a society.

To recapitulate, in any field of inquiry, it is an expert who is more likely to make important contributions rather than a beginner as an epxert will havepractical knowledge as well as sound judgement which cannot be acquired through college education. However, there can be certain cases, especially in the field of Technology, where a beginner is more likely to make important contributions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2848.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31343283582 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04629160046 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444029850746 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 912.6 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9993836252 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88461538462 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241904875957 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079023432865 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753464110688 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167562477067 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06509539395 0.0667264976115 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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