Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Some people would restrict themselves to only maintaining a strong relationship with their old friends while others like to meet new folks and develop a good rapport with them. Though everybody has their preferences, I personally think that making new friends is more important than trying hard to keep old friends. I feel this way for the reasons that will be illustrated in the following passage.
Nowadays, people have to keep moving from one place to another for reasons like pursuing education, changing jobs or other obligations. Consequently, friends who were once spending time together get separated. And human beings are social animals. They like to interact with each other. As people hop from one place to another, it becomes a necessity to befriend someone new to spend time with, to share happiness and sorrow and to help each other.
Making friends with new people will open a new world of opportunities. As one meets new people, s/he might not realise what is in store for them. Befriending someone can help boost much deserved career advancement. When a new person is befriended, not only will you be able to harness the power s/he possesses but also the powers of his/her friends possess and so on. So, one can only imagine how beneficial it would be to make new friends.
Let’s just say you only stick to your old friends. Is there a guarantee that they will always stay beside you to help you when you are in trouble? In this ever changing and unpredictable world, the answer is definitely no. This is where one can understand the importance of making new friends. They can come to your rescue at immediate notice as they are the ones that would be in your vicinity and sometimes even save you or your family member from a life and death situation.
Therefore, I think that making new friends is more important as they are the ones with whom we can socialize when one moves to a new place, they can open doors to boundless opportunities and they can be beside you to help you when in need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, while, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74504249292 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56348425006 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7538435135 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1578947368 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322713900687 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988297478387 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887154755225 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19253750884 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754252429471 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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