A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
There is lot of perspectives about the new factory that is going to be built however I do think it is not a great idea to be near our community for a couple of reasons still there is some benefits for new factory which we will discuss in the following paragraphs.
First of all have a new factory close to our community will makes some stuff easier for us for example waiting for supplies will decrease noticeably since the distance between the factory and the community is extremely shorter, that is expected because when the new farm that was built five years ago the community experienced no shortage or lack of crops no matter what the weather or situation is another pro is new work location for the locals and some people might change there job because of the near location in another words would you take a 15 mins ride to work or hour ride.
On the other hand, the factory release gases to the atmosphere such as carbon dioxide which is harmful to the environment might threat wild life another thing being the noise usually factories generate loud annoying noises as well as the trucks going to and out of it for massive amount of people this will be unacceptable in addition to that huge landscape will be taken in order to build the factory however it might be natural habitat for some animals while destroying it as first might seem unharmful in the long term it will effect the ecosystem causes a unpleasant change.
In conclusion, I don't think building a large factory near our community is a wise decision since the drawbacks are overshadowing the benefits of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, well, while, another thing, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60638297872 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45913484746 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 282.0 20.1344086022 1401% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1299.0 100.406767564 1294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 282.0 20.6045352989 1369% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 152.0 5.45110844103 2788% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195526202373 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195526202373 0.076458572812 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142090563138 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443864465814 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.3 11.7677419355 1201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -206.29 58.1214874552 -355% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 112.1 10.1575268817 1104% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.48 8.01818996416 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.8 10.0537634409 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.247311828 556% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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