summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage

Essay topics:

summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

There is lot of perspective around driverless cars and people opinions vary .

First of all, the essay started with mentioning traffic accidents saying humans do make errors however driverless car don't however in the lecture the tutor point out that driverless cars are made by human who make errors and he supported his idea with the example of the driverless car that drove over 1 million KM then eventually made an accident last month.

Secondly, the passage insists that automated cars will help the environment by being power efficient and overall smarter than humans however the lecture disagrees saying with automated cars the age restriction will vanish causing more cars being active at the same time resulting in consuming way more all around power then saved by themselves.

Thirdly, people have fun driving listening to music or radio on there way to work however the lecture thinks this time will turn into work time leading people to work more with less time to have fun and amusement.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...driverless cars and people opinions vary First of all the essay started with m...
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...s do make errors however driverless car dont however in the lecture the tutor point ...
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...n eventually made an accident last month Secondly the passage insists that aut...
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...fficient and overall smarter than humans however the lecture disagrees saying wit...
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...round power then saved by themselves Thirdly people have fun driving listenin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 167.0 270.72406181 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99401197605 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34199876756 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 145.348785872 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 419.366225166 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 167.0 21.2450331126 786% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 834.0 110.228320801 757% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 167.0 21.698381199 770% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 68.0 7.06452816374 963% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960430515141 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960430515141 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463845285339 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415824954503 0.0443174109184 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 85.6 13.3589403974 641% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -98.03 53.8541721854 -182% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 68.4 11.0289183223 620% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.61 8.42419426049 185% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.7273730684 513% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 68.8 10.498013245 655% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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