Passion is the key to success. A real sense of passion drives people to tackle the hardest of dilemmas and accomplish convolute goals. Passion has cardinal correlation with success and happiness. The possibility of positive outcome of any attempt is enormous when passion is involved. There is no argument that cream of the cream ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Investing the energy and efforts in something that brings in happiness may seem less effortless whereas when people are forced to do something which involves no passion, the entire effort will be burdensome. The right brothers who invented air planes, had undergone a series of failures before they succeeded in developing one of the most important, life-changing inventions. If they were not passionate about the novice idea and had not involved in multiple trials, the world would have been a totally different place than it is now. It is the true essence of passion that prevented them from abjuring upon failures.
A profound interest in a specific filed will drive people to establish a deep and firm knowledge about the same. Great ideas have developed from the simplest of things. Newton’s thought about gravity commenced when an apple fell on his head. The fact that the development of critical inventions start with such small incidents is amusing.
However, a passion without action is useless. A deep interest will not stimulate best ideas unless a deliberate learning is involved. Thought without action is a stone thrown to the deep sea. Most of the scientific inventions are specified as out-breaking by the media but the effort and time involved to achieve it are often ignored. Considering the entire records of inventions, the ideas that have been developed by accidents will be very few. Most inventions have arduous stories about the journey involved.
Every single thing around us which we usually fail to even notice and appreciate, have the potential to make its contribution to ground-breaking inventions. A passionate person with a firmly-established mind to not to give up can perform magic on common-place things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'stimulate the best'.
Suggestion: stimulate the best
...on is useless. A deep interest will not stimulate best ideas unless a deliberate learning is i...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... effort and time involved to achieve it are often ignored. Considering the entire r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90736919416 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.98659866 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61904761905 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147180548889 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441785427355 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351810355281 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817627609844 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288747686732 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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