In the modern fast-paced era where people are in a rat race, the advancement of science and technology has made the lives of people easier and convenient. The engender of problems is perpetual. Innovative ideas contribute to the resolution of existing dilemmas, giving rise to new ones. The concept of a society with zero problems is a pipe dream. Science and technology will mitigate the current dilemmas faced by the human race but never will it eradicate all the problems and create a troubleless society. Firstly the definition of the term 'problems' has to be made lucid. The problems might take up myriads of disparate shapes depending upon the scenarios. Not all problems are technology or convenience related. They can be emotional or mental struggles, financial issues, health issues, effects due to adverse climatic conditions and so forth. There is no way the technology can utterly resolve all the aforementioned issues. To a greater extent, technological advancements can alleviate the effects of these - thus helping people. Secondly, a problem that may seem like a bane to one faction may be a boon to another. When considering the diversity of society, one cannot land on a generalised conclusion of the cause and effect of problems. The cause and effect of each and every problem will differ from person to person and time to time. For instance, industrialists will support the construction of buildings in farmland and may posit the argument that it is significant for society's development. Whereas another faction of farmers will be adversely affected by these actions and environmentalists will strive for the betterment of farmers. Technology and science play no role in the previously mentioned scenario. Thirdly, the new invention creates new problems. The thin line between human want and human need is permeable. The more convenient life becomes, people will still search for easier and better options. The never-ending needs or indeed greed of people can never be satisfied. However, it is true that technology and science have made the world a better place to live. But the idea of a problem less world is like a painting made in water.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... lives of people easier and convenient. The engender of problems is perpetual. Innovative id...
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Line 1, column 1739, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...iously mentioned scenario. Thirdly, the new invention creates new problems. The thin line bet...
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Line 1, column 1927, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l search for easier and better options. The never-ending needs or indeed greed of p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10451977401 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93551132526 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.331966066 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5652173913 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3913043478 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34822390856 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896483322734 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684113229603 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34822390856 0.150359130593 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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