Human beings are very mercurial, when it comes to passion and interest. Most of the time, people ruminate about their likes and dislikes and of course their hobbies, but they fail to understand that their passion and interest in particular things helps in the rise of important ideas. While, you are focusing on more of grandiloquent stuffs, you forget to remember your hardcore interest about certain things which would bring best out of you.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons which gives us a pellucid view about how a interest and drive for banal things brings out best ideas. In other words, when someone is deeply fervent about the work the have been doing since ages then it always helps in making that work better each passing day. For example, it was Albert Einstein predilection towards the physics which helped him in developing theory of relativity. Similarly, we can also take example of Newton who introduced us to gravity because to us falling of apple from tree was a very ordinary site to see. But, it was his zealot energy, which pushed him forward to think beyond his limitation and hence Gravity was developed.
There are many times, when a person tries mold themselves with the trend and indulge themselves in many areas of work. As we all are wary about the fact and nature of human being, getting attracted in following the trend which sometimes lead to disaster in their work. For instance, ideas are something that will arise in your mind when you're deeply invested in it, but when you are trying 100 different things in order to bring best out of each one of them than it is next to impossible. Our history has been one of the best example for giving a life to this statement.
Moreover, there is no any kind of awkwardness or perplexity in doing the things that you have been doing since ages. But when you will try to fetch ideas from some of the new stuffs that you just indulge yourself with, than it would be very difficult for you to address them. Therefore, at the end of the day, it your inclination your knowledge and most importantly your passion about any particular things brings the best ideas.
In conclusion, I certainly concur with the given statement, as best ideas are not something that comes within a matter of time, it definitely requires your time and passion for that sort of things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: out the best
...erest and drive for banal things brings out best ideas. In other words, when someone is ...
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Suggestion: you're
...thing that will arise in your mind when youre deeply invested in it, but when you are...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: some
...t when you will try to fetch ideas from some of the new stuffs that you just indulge yourse...
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, of course, sort of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6803874092 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36527664143 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52784503632 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0534311108 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8125 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8125 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 5.21951772744 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348302719882 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105984872368 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951031707751 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194126451458 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757567866913 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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