The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement says that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. It does not always hold true. There will be instances where passionate interest in common things leads to the birth of a best idea. But it is not universal for all the best ideas. So, I don't agree that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Travelling a path which no one had ever followed may help to think in a new direction. Sometimes, this kind of adventurous attitude which opens up our thinking ability to a new level. At this stage, mind allows different ideas to flow freely through the mind and analyzes the issue in a numerous directions. Eventually, This leads to creation of a best idea.
A need is always a great driving force in the creation of best ideas. A need triggers the mind to think to the fullest to find a way. Most of the world's great innovations are born out of a specific need. Medicines are one of the best examples. With medicines, the mortality rate is reduced to a greater extent in the modern old compared to the ancient world. To save a life is the need which triggered the idea of inventing the medicine. So, A need of the moment plays key role in the creation of best ideas.
I consider that there will be times where passionate interest in commonplace things leads to best ideas. Newton's curiostiy about the reason for an apple fall aground resulted in great ideas and inventions. But it is not the only source for the origin of best ideas.
To conclude, it can be said that there are numerous factors through which best ideas are shaped not only passionate interest in common place things. So, The best ideas not only arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things but also from a different other things stated above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... in common things leads to the birth of a best idea. But it is not universal for ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...universal for all the best ideas. So, I dont agree that the best ideas arise from a ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'direction'?
Suggestion: direction
...nd and analyzes the issue in a numerous directions. Eventually, This leads to creation of ...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
.... Eventually, This leads to creation of a best idea. A need is always a great ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...s a great driving force in the creation of best ideas. A need triggers the mind to thin...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...e moment plays key role in the creation of best ideas. I consider that there will be...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...te interest in commonplace things leads to best ideas. Newtons curiostiy about the reas...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...t is not the only source for the origin of best ideas. To conclude, it can be said t...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'which the best'.
Suggestion: which the best
...that there are numerous factors through which best ideas are shaped not only passionate in...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... things but also from a different other things stated above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.634375 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53705160755 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45625 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6266375841 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.619047619 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.2380952381 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.80952380952 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248306880818 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818244484744 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081306144419 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150785602256 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805799298801 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.