Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Problems of any society can be solved by laws and the legal system which are time relevant. I disagree with the claim that many problems of society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. With out law and the legal system, there will be chaos, disorder and confusion in society. It is not that laws and the legal system can not solve the modern society problems but they tend to be irrelevant for the as the time goes. So, laws and the legal system have to be checked periodically whether they are being relevant to the progressing society. Let us discuss some of the benefits of law and the legal system in the society.
Firstly, Law and the legal system helps us to maintain discipline in the society. Particularly in the highly populated areas, Laws and the legal system are mandatory to govern such large number of people. With out this discipline, it is extremely difficult to cater to needs of all the people. Discipline is the first thing needed to create a great society. Discipline makes people do the things in right manner and prevents resorting to activities which are harmful to the society.
Laws and the legal system helps to put a standard and direction in the society so that anyone who follow those standards will travel in a direction which makes the society a better place. If not for the laws and the legal system, everyone acts according to thier own instinct or choice. This may be beneficial to the individual but severely harmful to the society. The individual may not know the repurcussions of his choices in the society and may end up doing that forever. This may lead to irrevocable damage to the society.
In addition, with out the laws and the legal system, governance becomes difficult as we have to address each issue individually. This consumes a lot of time. It is not good for society to handle the issues sluggishly.
Traffic system is the best example to support that laws and the legal system make society a better place.
It is not that laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds. It should understand what is happening in the current world. It should act according to the current society needs. So, many problems of modern society can be solved by laws and the legal system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: Without
...be solved by laws and the legal system. With out law and the legal system, there will be...
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...the progressing society. Let us discuss some of the benefits of law and the legal system in...
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Suggestion: Without
... to govern such large number of people. With out this discipline, it is extremely diffic...
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Suggestion: without
... damage to the society. In addition, with out the laws and the legal system, governan...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...what is happening in the current world. It should act according to the current soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67676767677 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47343811991 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419191919192 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7943124735 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393565857649 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133001693007 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134691079813 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20911738289 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12233017996 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.