As society progresses, people are subjected to changing views and opinions. Newer beliefs are formed and laws are made so that these beliefs are represented in society. For instance, the term marriage can be accepted as a union of two humans not necessarily for procreation which makes Gay marriage legal. The law then protects their fundamental rights and prevents discrimination against them.
I partially agree with the claim here that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. For example, India has one of the highest rates of sexual crimes against women. It includes eve-teasing, rapes and sexual assault. Despite decades of laws against sexual crimes, it still remains one of the most dangerous places for women. One of the reasons for this in the mentality of uneducated criminals who view women as objects for sexual pleasure only. Their views are dramatically shaped by the misogynist portrayal of girls in pop and almost free internet with thousands of videos of humiliating and degrading porn. Such a rise of mentality despite capital punishments has resulted in a widespread threat to young girls restricting their freedom to their homes. Therefore, it is necessary to change the mentality of these people by proper education from childhood otherwise the legal system is helpless before the society.
Strongs laws can decrease the crime rate but enforcing such laws does not solve the root problem. People sometimes have rather no choice than to take such steps. People addicted to drugs for instance, have little control over their actions. The craving to get high requires them to commit crimes, steal money. The problem worsens over time and it is impossible to get out without help. Capital punishments won't help change their behaviour and proper medical assistance is required in these scenarios. Proper care needs to be provided for addicts and rehabilitation and probation must be used to prevent them from using drugs.
However, laws act a strong deterrent for the prevention of crimes by people. They can stop violent tendencies by people as they would contemplate the disastrous consequences of their actions. To illustrate, India has strong laws against domestic violence which have decreased the reports of such crimes drastically for several years because the punishment of a single incident of violence is very severe. Although it does not guarantee more respect for wives it slowly results in a better attitude towards them.
In conclusion, many problems that arise from illiteracy and the changing cultures cannot be solved by using force. But they can ensure in the long run that a change in attitude is necessary and will happen in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2285.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18140589569 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65613713972 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548752834467 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8852393053 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.64 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215639717945 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605686972455 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088318216993 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110964956982 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489639744928 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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