The recommendation by the owner of Sunnyside Towers that the restricted water flow will increase their profits is ill-founded and rife with assumptions.
The first question that needs to be answered is that the showerheads modified on the first five floors are actually a large source of water consumption or not. Perhaps restricting the original flow does change water consumption because people now use water for a longer duration. As of right now, there is no evidence that any change in water consumption has happened over the past month due to restricted water flow.
Secondly, it needs to be considered that since these changes seem to happen without the consent of the residents, they may be illegal. Also, the manager has to act on the complaints of low water pressure soon. If residents find out about the deceit they may sue the owner which may cause larger losses in the future.
Thirdly, it has mentioned that the profits of the company will increase considerably but there is no evidence that the cost of water is a dominant portion of the budget. Usually, a small portion of the budget goes in spending towards the water and charge levied is in a range of water consumption. If the payments of the water consumption are meagre no "considerable profit" can be supposed to happen.
Lastly, the author recommends restricting water flow on all the floors of the Sunny Tower but it is possible that the pattern of consumption of water is different for different households. Hence, restricting the flow will not be a viable option. In conclusion, all the above questions need to be considered and answered in positive for the recommendation to have the likely result.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1364 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.803 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.744 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.855 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.654 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... complaints of low water pressure soon. If residents find out about the deceit the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 284.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91444663813 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 705.55239521 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9428950884 57.8364921388 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 5.70786347227 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238743780434 0.218282227539 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863855278976 0.0743258471296 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696491036012 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136555761001 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744342011214 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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