The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
do the best ideas arise from the commonplace? The writer tries to suggests. I don't really think so. commonplaces fields includes many disciplines like same forms of musics, same form of dance, same forms of sports etc. these fields that we already know or many things has already been achieved in this sector that to develop a new idea is not that easy or these fields are not interesting.
A passionate persons always tries to do something out of the box. he/she is keen to learn thing and develop new ideas rather then following the conventional ideas. For examples, Gallileo was criticized by the people at that time when he told the fact that earth revolves around the sun. but many people denounced him yet he didn't backed out from what he believed. All people use to believe the conventional view that sun revolves around the earth which was erroneous. it was the passion of gallieo that made him discover the the fact. so interest and thinking differently generates new ideas.
Also, if we keep doing the same thing then we can never achieve anything new in any fields. we learn same thing from our ancestors and then pass the same thing to our descendants, there is no creation of new ideas. our mind creativity remains unused. Foe instance, a man who have interest in the tennis he/she learns the technique of the game nothing new is there. so to create new idea something out of the box should be done.
we can see many examples in this world, Bill Gates, steve jobs etc they are renown all over the world because they are the person who tried to give something new for this world. steve jobs was passionate about the software at that time when people did not knew much about it. but he was dedicated wanted to bring or develop new ideas. this passion of him made him one of the creative persona in the world.
In sum passionate interest in new things will generate new ideas rather than in commonplace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...om the commonplace? The writer tries to suggests. I dont really think so. commonplaces f...
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... are not interesting. A passionate persons always tries to do something out of the...
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...s tries to do something out of the box. he/she is keen to learn thing and develop ...
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...earn thing and develop new ideas rather then following the conventional ideas. For e...
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...act that earth revolves around the sun. but many people denounced him yet he didnt ...
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...n. but many people denounced him yet he didnt backed out from what he believed. All p...
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...d out from what he believed. All people use to believe the conventional view that s...
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...s around the earth which was erroneous. it was the passion of gallieo that made hi...
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...ssion of gallieo that made him discover the the fact. so interest and thinking differen...
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...ssion of gallieo that made him discover the the fact. so interest and thinking differen...
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...eo that made him discover the the fact. so interest and thinking differently gener...
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...ver achieve anything new in any fields. we learn same thing from our ancestors and...
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...nts, there is no creation of new ideas. our mind creativity remains unused. Foe ins...
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...nique of the game nothing new is there. so to create new idea something out of the...
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...ing out of the box should be done. we can see many examples in this world, Bi...
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...d to give something new for this world. steve jobs was passionate about the software ...
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...d wanted to bring or develop new ideas. this passion of him made him one of the crea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6443148688 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36355956645 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9836743544 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4090909091 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839411152586 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309938643294 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041864054181 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052844174365 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208555768893 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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