There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsiblity to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws.
every society has laws that could be either just and either unjust. laws are to be indifferent for all the people. some laws may be just for some group of people while it may not be just for other group. so i mostly agree with the writer about people's responsibility to obey just laws and, disobey and resist unjust law. some regions are mention below with examples.
there should be law to control the action of the people in the society. laws are to be equal for all people residing in the society. laws are need to make society well organised and systematic. everyone of us should obey laws. there numerous laws, laws related to traffic, laws related to eduaction. laws related to human rights etc. if these laws were not there then system of the country would be in chaos. it is the responsibility of every people in the society to follow the laws. For instance we should follow the traffic rules, everyone should drive within the speed limit that will help prevent accidents in the country. these laws will help to maintain better society.
it is not necessary that every laws are just. there are laws that are not just and people should not be bounded by these laws. laws should be there to provide justic to the people nto to impede the rights of the people. For example, in country like Nepal there is a law that women should change there sur name after their marriage as per their husband sur name but i think it is rediculous to change our sur name. it might not be issue to many people while it is the matter of great deal to some women who don't want to change their identity that she has been given since she was born. Latter goverment amended the law and now women don't have to change their sur name after marriage. if women had not spoken about these laws then it woud have not changed. so we should resist the law that are not just for the society.
However there are laws that may sound unjust but indeed they are the only major to slove the problem in the country. In china earlier couple could give birth to only one child which and if they mistakily happen to conceive another baby then they should be abandon. it seems so heartless but it proved to be most effective major to control the birth in the nations. so it really does not mean that we should resist unjust laws. it may seems unjust but it may be good in other way around as it is patend from the given expalnation.
Finally, i think that making law is not a easy task. laws are not be amended as per the situation and need of the people and should benefit all people as far as possbible if not should be agreed by two -third of the population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, really, so, then, third, well, while, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 490.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37959183673 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09421964823 2.79657885939 75% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40612244898 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9297825736 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5333333333 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247482183594 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894483899487 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899181411571 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145615549586 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730224539022 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.1639044944 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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