Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
university education is all most mandatory today. it is also quite exorbitant and many students cannot even afford university education. so it might sound apposite that government should provide free education to students who has been admitted to university but cannot afford the tuition but as per my conscience, i do not think it is the best idea to the problem.
students have variant field of interest and they are enrolled in the fields that they are avid about. fee structures also vary according to different courses that students choose. it is not apropos for government to provide free university education as fee structure is varied and also exorbitant. For example there are number of students who cannot afford university education even though they have been admitted. Suppose if government provides fee for those students then number of students enrolled in community college will be high but it cannot solve problem of all the students. What about the students enrolled in the private colleges who cannot afford the fee? so i do not think providing free university education by government is not apropos.
university students are able to work and earn for their education. I think government should concoct the environment in the country so that students can work as well as earn for their education. For example, students can work in university library to help to manage the books. Part time work for students should be available so that they could afford for themselves. Only then all the students will be equally benefited and afford their own education.
government can even provide education loans for the students who cannot afford their education in low interest rate. so that students can return their loan amount along with the interest on time and they do not even have renounce their university education. they must be provided with opportunities to work while their is vacation. they are in the age that they can afford for their education but platform should be available.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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university education is all most mandatory today. ...
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... education is all most mandatory today. it is also quite exorbitant and many stude...
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...annot even afford university education. so it might sound apposite that government...
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...d the tuition but as per my conscience, i do not think it is the best idea to the...
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...ink it is the best idea to the problem. students have variant field of interest ...
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...t is the best idea to the problem. students have variant field of interest and they...
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...in the fields that they are avid about. fee structures also vary according to diffe...
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...different courses that students choose. it is not apropos for government to provid...
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...ate colleges who cannot afford the fee? so i do not think providing free universit...
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... colleges who cannot afford the fee? so i do not think providing free university ...
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...ation by government is not apropos. university students are able to work and earn for ...
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... students can work in university library to help to manage the books. Part time w...
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...y library to help to manage the books. Part time work for students should be available s...
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...nefited and afford their own education. government can even provide education lo...
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...ed and afford their own education. government can even provide education loans for th...
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...d their education in low interest rate. so that students can return their loan amo...
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...erest on time and they do not even have renounce their university education. they must b...
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...ve renounce their university education. they must be provided with opportunities to ...
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...ovided with opportunities to work while their is vacation. they are in the age that t...
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...nities to work while their is vacation. they are in the age that they can afford for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64467689636 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415151515152 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8804307081 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5789473684 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29031437034 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122178776602 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766335371153 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216386751423 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732252929895 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.