As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I disagree with what speaker asserts. As we know more and more we become more wise and proficient. It is because of our knowledge we human being are the most erudite erudite " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">creature of the earth. because of knowledge today world has morphed
to technological world. There is a saying that " Little knowlede is dangerous." As we know much more about certain
subjects things become more simple, we know more about different aspects of the
subjects matter which make things less complex. Meticulouse knowledge in any subject help to deal with different
problems encountered in that field field " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">and also assists in managing and thriving the field. For example
let's consider the health sector, people used used " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">to loose their life because of very common diseases like dirrohea, TB, etc but this diseases diseases " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">are considered as no problematic today. cancer which is is " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">considerd one of the chronic disease of the world world " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">is treated or lets say cure has been found. Its all because of more knowledge and experiment regarding cancer. However, more knowledge can make things less
comprehensible. Sometimes things become more complex as we go deep or try to
gather more knowledge about the field. example as we grow older our life take
its part to more convoluted path. As a child we are all unknown about the
earthly world, about different aspect of the world, everthing is so simple and comely. but as we grow old things become
more involved because we come to know more about this world. Despite of this
more knowledge assists us to handle and manage our life. world has transformed
so much coming to this age, new advancement in different field has taken place.
today people they life highly sophisticated life.comprehensive
knowledge has helped to know about how the nature works, and has aid in knowing
different pros and cons of different activities. we human being has been able
to go to space and even to other planet after acquire more fastidious knowledge
in this filed, thing thing " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">considerd impossible are turned into possible. Hence, more knowledge will not make things
complex but make us more through and erudite and make things simpler leading to
advancement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: erudite
...r knowledge we human being are the most erudite erudite ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...: default;'>creature of the earth. because of knowledge today world has morphed t...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...: default;'>creature of the earth. because of knowledge today world has morphed t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: field
...different problems encountered in that field field ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: used
...lets consider the health sector, people used used ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ce: pre-wrap; cursor: default;'>to loose their life because of very common disea...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...mon diseases like dirrohea, TB, etc but this diseases diseases ' style='wh...
^^^^
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: diseases
...iseases like dirrohea, TB, etc but this diseases diseases ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cancer
...are considered as no problematic today. cancer which is is ' style='white-sp...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 336, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...d as no problematic today. cancer which is is ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 451, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: world
...iderd one of the chronic disease of the world world ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 542, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...p; cursor: default;'>is treated or lets say cure has been found. Its all becaus...
^^^^
Line 6, column 572, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...reated or lets say cure has been found. Its all because of more knowledge and exper...
^^^
Line 8, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Example
... gather more knowledge about the field. example as we grow older our life take its par...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...rld, everthing is so simple and comely. but as we grow old things become more invo...
^^^
Line 12, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: World
...sists us to handle and manage our life. world has transformed so much coming to this...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
...nt in different field has taken place. today people they life highly sophisticated l...
^^^^^
Line 16, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... pros and cons of different activities. we human being has been able to go to spa...
^^
Line 18, column 16, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: thing
...re fastidious knowledge in this filed, thing thing ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77974683544 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.10724677193 2.79657885939 147% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9787486819 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.157894737 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182542063943 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956819571628 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932325265534 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917982444443 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715431517775 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.