As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to a recent survey, there is a surprising divergence that as we get more knowledge, things don't get easier to understand but, rather, they get more complex and mysterious. In response to this topic, some people hold the belief that it makes much sense while others oppose it based on their divergent values, educational backgrounds, personal experiences and financial situations. Insofar as I can think, I believe that as we enrich our knowledge and we can better understand some things in the world, but at the same time it becomes more mysterious.
Most obviously, long ago, people generally believed in the theory of the round sky and the earth that the way ancient sages thought about the world. You can see the ignorance of the people at the time, and I think that they could not reasonably explain the theories they put forward. after that, geocentric theory was put forward, which was formed by the miletus school, and then put forward by the ancient Greek scholar odox, and then gradually established and perfected after further development by Aristotle and ptolemy, and meanwhile, ptolemy believed that the earth stood still at the center of the universe, and the Moon, Mercury, Venus, Sun, Mars, Jupiter and Saturn orbit the earth in their respective orbits, which is an improvement over previous ones to a large extent. Furthermore, Copernicus came up with heliocentric theory, and a lot of things about the universe were understood. Therefore, this proves that when we know more, a lot of knowledge will help us understand more.
In addition, long ago, it was widely believed that god existed and did everything in the world.For example, some of our favorite marvel movies have Thor, Zeus and other mythological characters. Many great men have even paid the price of their lives to overturn this idea, of course, what they support is the worship of science, that is, we learn some knowledge of physics, chemistry, biology and so on from childhood, which makes us not so ignorant.so much is understood and solved in our society.we can reasonably use these natural knowledge and scientific knowledge to make contributions to human development and stable development. if we do not believe in science, we will believe that we live in the world of ghosts and gods, and always in a state of fear, but we believe in science and understand more and more, we can live in this society like a fish in water. once again, the more we know, the easier it is to understand things.
Admittedly, the more we know, the more we may not know. For example, scientists have probably understood the structure of the earth relatively well and are ready to study the universe, but the exploration of the universe is far more complicated than the exploration of the earth. we know the major components of the earth, we know the distribution of the earth, we know the approximate location of the earth in the solar system and so on.However, for the exploration of the universe, we may need to break the limit of our human beings, because I once learned from previous materials that the universe is a four-dimensional world and a one-dimensional world, but human beings can only observe the three-dimensional world.What about the four dimensional world, but if the big bang were to be overturned, some of the theories of the universe that we've been studying and some of the theories of dimensional space would be overturned.we are faced with the problem that human limit cannot be solved. we may need to continuously evolve under the natural selection of the environment, continuously break the limit of human, become a new species beyond human, better inherit human culture and study the universe. Where is the life, there is hope. this is partly proof that the more we know, the more mysterious the world may become.
To sum up, the more we know, the broader our scope of knowledge will become, allowing us to better explore this beautiful and mysterious world.it could be simple, it could be complicated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, i think, in addition, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 33.0505617978 215% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3352.0 2235.4752809 150% => OK
No of words: 678.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94395280236 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10278680062 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8097945162 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 318.0 215.323595506 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469026548673 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 1039.5 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.523672404 60.3974514979 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.421052632 118.986275619 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6842105263 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224804476617 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082385234555 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647037679028 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125556189498 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406645795824 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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