The human mind is superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds
is human mind always be superior to machine, as the speaker asserts? I am convinced that human beings are the most intelligent creature of the earth. All kind of inventions that have been made so far are the outcomes of human intelligence. so it is obvious that human mind is superior than machines.
human beings intelligence and creativity has no limitation. if we see the history of human being then we can see that we have come a long way from stone age to age of information and technology. technology is just the result of human mind and it can never ever be profound than human mind. All machines are dependent on human for their operation. For instance, humans have made Robert which make use of artificial intelligence, which make Roberts able to make decision on their own but they work only if we human beings operate them. they are like dead body without operation of human being.
Similarly machines are made to perform particular types of functions, they cannot do multi tasking as we do. human brain is always looking for new invention. What makes us superior than machine? I think one of the most relevant reasons is our in analytical power and no limitation of imagination. For instance, let’s talk about the computer. computer is like boon in this world that human beings has invented. computer can do multi taking as they are designed but they cannot perform the task that they are not programmed for but humans can. computer does not have ability to imagine the things although it has analytical power to some extent but not as human beings.
However, greatness of machines cannot be ignored. machines are accurate, fast, multitasking at the same time etc. machines have made our society sophisticated and well-organized. For example, People even to to excavate the soil for any construction huge manpower were require and was time-consuming back then. but today drilling machines are used that completes work in no time as compare to human. they are accurate and more reliable. Despite all these they are not superior to human brains.
In sum, it can is evident from the above examples that human mind is superior to machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88315217391 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6852762594 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51902173913 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6866084641 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1153846154 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405678739311 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124976897388 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936550608316 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254614327286 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544446538148 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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