The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement states that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. I strongly agree with the statement. The inventions invented till date are done only by people who had a passionate interest in what they were doing. This is a clear evidence that the people who are passionate in what they do reach higher levels
All the activities which we do in our day to day life can be classified into two type with respect to the statement we are discussing on. The first one is the work which we do with passionate interest and the other one is the work done without passionate interest. The type of work is where the person shows a lot of commitment towards the work he does. The reason behind this is very simple. He loves what he does. Only when the work is done with such amount of commitment and love produces intended results. This could be explained with the below example. This scenario mostly prevails in India where the students are forced to take engineering after their schooling. The main reason to be blamed for this trend is due to the job opportunities. And also the students are forced to choose computer science or electronics and communications as their majors in engineering. This is again due to the reason stated above. Students’ interest is never considered by their parents. Due to this student who are forced to join the engineering without any interest only tries to pass the exams than to really study or learn the course. If the students are given an opportunity to choose their education, then there are very good chances of students to show a lot of interest towards their subject leading them to think out of the syllabus. This ultimately helps them in achieving higher levels by implementing ideas which arise from the passionate interest shown towards the studies. Another example to explain this is when students from different background like mechanical engineering are forced to work in IT companies without much of an interest. Expecting good outputs from such employees is very ambitious for the company as they have no interest in what they are doing.
However, sometimes out of the box ideas arises even when you are not passionate towards doing it. The CEO of Microsoft once stated that he will more likely hire a lazy person than the intelligent person because a lazy person will always find a way to solve a problem using shortcuts. This scenario is true where a lazy person though not passionate towards his work is more likely find a way to finish the job by using any of the shortcuts in getting the job done. Though this is done as a result of lack of interest in the field of work but still this produces desired results. Though this case holds true here but on a majority, best ideas arises only when passionate interest is shown.
As stated in the above paragraphs, the best ideas are more likely to arise only when a person is passionate towards what he is doing. In absence of that expecting someone to do something will never result in good output.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of commitment towards the work he does. The reason behind this is very simple. He l...
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Line 3, column 628, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...s case holds true here but on a majority, best ideas arises only when passionate inter...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'as a result', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228318584071 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.192920353982 0.157235817809 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070796460177 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0530973451327 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0424778761062 0.0444667217837 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125663716814 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.058407079646 0.0406280797675 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56742763591 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0353982300885 0.030933414821 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129203539823 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00884955752212 0.0249443105267 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0336283185841 0.0148568991511 226% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3029.0 2732.02544248 111% => OK
No of words: 531.0 452.878318584 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70433145009 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308851224105 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218455743879 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161958568738 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103578154426 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56742763591 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427495291902 0.48968727796 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.4019816524 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0780779242 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.185185185 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.407407407407 0.674092028746 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 41.5122410546 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.42944785276 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41519284173 0.391690518653 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116085467569 0.123202303941 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0937136354427 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470806035844 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147958479697 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157551708905 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892682635461 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.441784425386 0.385218514788 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0284279163289 0.0692045440612 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28614205464 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621944183303 0.0653680567796 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.