As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement states that when people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of the humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. I strongly disagree with the given statement. Technology which is available today is only due to the human brains behind it. Moreover the people who are benefitted out of this are making use of the technology to reach greater level.
First, technology which is available to the general public gives them a new opportunity to learn new things which were not possible earlier. To state this with an example, we will discuss about the role of internet in our day to day life. 20 years ago when the internet was not available, people in order to learn something new, had to go to libraries. Not all the times you will get the required information from general libraries. In such cases people had to travel to different places to gather required information which would be useful for their studies or for their research. But after the internet came into picture, gathering information on any topic in the world can be done within seconds. This helps the people of current generation to make use of this technology to get information from various sources all over the world. This certainly helps people in saving their precious time on gathering information and utilizing the time in going deeper into the understanding of the subject.
Secondly, technology has given us the opportunity to connect people from different part of the world. This certainly helps the people of this generation in multiple ways. With technologies such as Skype, where video calling to any person in any part of the world is made possible, has been a great gift to the people. This helps people in connecting with someone from other part of the world with similar minds. This has given way to work together from two extremes of the world without actually being together.
Technologies only aim is to make human life easier. And that is where is technology is heading to. When technology has always helped human in one or the other way, it has certainly helped in helping the ability of humans to think to a different level which would have not been possible without the technology advancements. Hence technology will never be a reason for deterioration of the ability of humans to think for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...only due to the human brains behind it. Moreover the people who are benefitted out of th...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...t, technology which is available to the general public gives them a new opportunity to learn n...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...le without the technology advancements. Hence technology will never be a reason for d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241860465116 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.16511627907 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0744186046512 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0488372093023 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0302325581395 0.0444667217837 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13023255814 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0511627906977 0.0406280797675 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64663078146 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0581395348837 0.030933414821 188% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113953488372 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162790697674 0.0249443105267 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255813953488 0.0148568991511 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2350.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 399.0 452.878318584 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88972431078 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323308270677 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230576441103 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177944862155 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127819548872 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64663078146 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 219.290929204 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.2794510837 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9157271544 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.904761905 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 42.0576441103 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.73333333333 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.555038281029 0.391690518653 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105875700363 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0600721372553 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529832579763 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111131723573 0.149214159877 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211371003192 0.161403998019 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112989572126 0.0892212321368 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437475295887 0.385218514788 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0635954054548 0.0692045440612 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404645081541 0.275328986314 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105005050161 0.0653680567796 161% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.