The citizens of Forsythe have adopted more healthful lifestyles. Their responses to a recent survey show that in their eating habits they conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they did ten years ago. Furthermore, there has been a fourfold increase in sales of food products containing kiran, a substance that a scientific study has shown reduces cholesterol. This trend is also evident in reduced sales of sulia, a food that few of the healthiest citizens regularly eat.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The given paragraph which appeared in the health magazine states that the citizen of Forsythe has adopted more healthful lifestyles. Also, they have adopted the eating habits recommended by the government. This is also evident from the fourfold increase in sales of food products containing kiran, a substance which reduces cholesterol. The conclusion made out of this statement by the author is that the sales of sulia, which is a food that few of the most healthy citizens regularly eat have reduced only due the change in the lifestyle and the adoption of the government nutritional recommendations and the increase in the food product containing kiran. The author has not taken into multiple scenarios which would have been the reason behind the decrease in the sales of sulia which is explained in the below paragraphs.
Sulia, which has been used by few of the most healthy citizens in the past might not have given the desired result. As the citizens were actively looking for adopting more healthful lifestyles, the news about the sulia would have spread all over the Forsythe about the outcome of using the product. This would have created a negative impact on the sales of sulia. Also if the few of the most healthy citizens who were regularly eating sulia had any side effects on using it would have added oil to the fire.
Meanwhile, the food products which were containing kiran would have had an upper hand in the interest shown by the citizens of Forsythe as the people were actively adopting more healthful lifestyles. In a general scenario like this where kiran was having an upper hand when compared to sulia, food products containing kiran would have strongly advertised their products to the people. As a normal human being when you are aware that the sulia isn't producing intended results, when you see a new similar product being strongly advertised all over the place, will have the interest to try the new product. This mentality would have spread across the place including the product dealers and shopkeepers. If the dealers and shopkeepers have shown more interest on kiran than sulia then this would have had a serious impact on the sales of sulia.
If the author has stressed upon the other evidence like sulia not producing the desired results, strong advertising by products containing kiran, dealers and shopkeepers who are one of the main reasons of good sales of a product preferred products using kiran than sulia ,.etc. the conclusion would have made more sense.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... negative impact on the sales of sulia. Also if the few of the most healthy citizens...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... Meanwhile, the food products which were containing kiran would have had an upper hand in t...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...being when you are aware that the sulia isnt producing intended results, when you se...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...referred products using kiran than sulia ,.etc. the conclusion would have made mor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252232142857 0.25644967241 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.178571428571 0.15541462614 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0848214285714 0.0836205057962 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446428571429 0.0520304965353 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0111607142857 0.0272364105082 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131696428571 0.125424944231 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0915178571429 0.0416121511921 220% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.49696414311 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00892857142857 0.026700313972 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.158482142857 0.113004496875 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245535714286 0.0255425247493 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0290178571429 0.0127820249294 227% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2506.0 2731.13054187 92% => OK
No of words: 420.0 446.07635468 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96666666667 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.378187486979 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259523809524 0.287650121315 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192857142857 0.208842608468 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0952380952381 0.135150697306 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49696414311 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 207.018472906 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.469332199767 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6264670985 52.1807786196 86% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.039408867 80% => OK
Sentence length: 26.25 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2382127063 57.7814097925 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.625 141.986410481 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.724660767414 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.58251231527 112% => OK
Readability: 52.2023809524 51.9672348444 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.02857142857 1.8405768891 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262363032807 0.441005458295 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.218707353652 0.135418324435 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0972634042832 0.0829849096947 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.660074711278 0.58762219726 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147792459534 0.147661913831 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136218713247 0.193483328276 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572739040967 0.0970749176394 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.597770830032 0.42659136922 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0724271184273 0.0774707102158 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191000912755 0.312017818177 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414910969421 0.0698173142475 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.33743842365 132% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 6.46551724138 155% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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