People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers
The issuing task here states that the People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. I strongly agree that people who make wise decisions have no role for emotions to play while making their decision.
Taking a decision on any circumstance will be highly influenced by their past experience. One who has taken an emotional decision in the past would have lesser chances of making that mistake again but whereas one who has taken a wise decision by putting aside his emotions will always go with the right spirit leading him to make better decisions leading to better output. What I mean to say as a wise decision is one which takes into consideration of all the facts such as the outcome of the decision, the consequences which one has to face for not choosing the other option, financial constraint if there is any, how his decision would impact his social status etc. I would like to narrate an example in support of my position. Consider a person who earns a decent amount of money who has a family who is totally dependent on him for the living. One such person cannot make an emotional decision on looking at an event which provokes him personally like to help the elderly people at the old age house by resigning his job in order to help the elderly people. This decision is clearly made on the basis of emotion with considering the impacts that would hit his family financially. The wise decision here would have been to help the elderly people by donating money every month or by taking care of those people on weekends.
However, not all the time decisions make out of emotions have gone wrong. There are instances where decisions made out of emotions have helped people achieve higher levels by encouraging them to do so. But chances of this happening is very minimal.
Hence whenever the decisions are made one should keep aside the emotions and take a wise choice which will ultimately help him go in the right direction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ance will be highly influenced by their past experience. One who has taken an emotional decisio...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... of this happening is very minimal. Hence whenever the decisions are made one sho...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'as to', 'i mean', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234501347709 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.194070080863 0.157235817809 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0619946091644 0.0880659088768 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0458221024259 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0458221024259 0.0444667217837 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123989218329 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0592991913747 0.0406280797675 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43275888507 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269541778976 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00269541778976 0.0016655270985 162% => OK
Determiners: 0.11051212938 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0269541778976 0.0249443105267 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0404312668464 0.0148568991511 272% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2014.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 352.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72159090909 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323863636364 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230113636364 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150568181818 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880681818182 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43275888507 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 52.4802184655 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1428571429 23.380412469 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4452291355 59.4972553346 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.857142857 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 23.380412469 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 48.1542207792 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.46226415094 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288341131067 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104011196145 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0656301237298 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564318531208 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200773979821 0.149214159877 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132286514188 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171856353561 0.0892212321368 193% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233144895835 0.385218514788 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0863625222401 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246171754419 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220090709415 0.0653680567796 337% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.