The best ideas arise from a passionate
interest in commonplace things.
Some believe that the best ideas arise from interest in very complex subjects. However, the majority of significant inventions and discoveries have arisen from passionate interest in the commonplace things. This is true because passion is required for overcoming obstacles on the journey to discovery, commonplace items frequently spark creativity, and commonplace items help simplify complex concepts.
First, passion is essential for overcoming obstacles that one encounters during the process of innovation. When inventing and innovating, one often has struggles and obstacles. For example, when Edison invented the light bulb, he had many failed attempts, but his passion for his work helped him overcome the failures and complete his goal. Thus, passionate interest in one’s work is essential for the generation and execution of the best ideas.
Furthermore, commonplace items frequently spark the creativity necessary for brilliant ideas. Commonplace items can provide opportunities for improvement, such as the many improvements that have occurred in the technology used for telephones. Telephones have undergone several rounds of innovation, from their invention, to the mobile phone, and now to the smartphone. The telephone has undergone so many phases of innovation because it is a common item used by many people. Therefore, commonplace items often provide sources for innovation and creativity which can be utilized to create brilliant ideas.
Finally, commonplace items often help people simplify complex concepts. By observing commonplace items such as ones of passionate interest, more complex concepts can be more easily understood. For instance, many scientists gain inspiration for theories from commonplace items. An example of this is when attempting to find a solution to detecting surrounding objects without visuals, looking at how a more commonplace concept like echolocation inspired technology such as sonar to solve this complex issue. Thus, commonplace items can assist in the simplification of complex concepts .
While those who believe that the best ideas arise from interest in complex subjects may have some valid arguments such as complex concepts often having high impacts on society, overall, passionate interest in commonplace things has a more significant effect on the development of innovative ideas. Passionate interest in common items gives rise to the best ideas because passion is required to motivate the innovator during the process of discovery. Additionally, commonplace items help spark creativity and provide inspiration for the simplification of complex concepts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83636363636 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05997154624 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5943117594 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.35 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215721661814 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786488869078 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768091911198 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146857954576 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104876821017 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 48.8420337079 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.1639044944 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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