The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The statement asserts that the best way to prepare the young people for leadership position in government and huge firms is by exposing them to competetion and instilling them on how to cooperate. By instilling them on young children they can learn how to behave with others in similar position at a very young age.
Firstly, it is very important for people to respect other people. This can be easily achieved easily by teaching them at a very young age. For instance, when a child is thought how to behave when he is with his parent's business delegates. It would help hime improve his behavior and also get a basic idea on how to behave deferential among them.
Secondly, nowadays, youngsters are growing up with a lot of potential and the chances for majority of them reaching a respectable position in big firm is high. So it would be really helpful to for them to get a exposure about the working of such big firms at a young age would eventually help them gain their confidence. It also builds a sense of competition among the people which will be helpful for them in the future.
Furthermore, exposing the children to such measures expressed in the statement would help them in building confidence in tackling certain situations when they reach the leadership level in the future. For example, while doing business with other companies in the future, it very important to be confident to instill a sense of cooperation between the two parties.
Finally, from the above given scenarios we can come to a conclusion that it is very important to expose the younger to the competition in the future and instilling a sense of cooperation among them. This will help the future generation to prosper and help them achieve great heights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion in the future and instilling a sense of cooperation among them. This will hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8073089701 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68613228906 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471760797342 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2300175335 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338548391153 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132185861291 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992095257056 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198083536327 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861106811086 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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