The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership is very important for the prosperity of any government, industry or other field as well. And that is why, this character is needed to be cultivated in the youth of the soceity. The prompt suggests that the importance of cooperation is more demanding than competition. However, I mostly diagree with this view for two reasons and do concede that in some circumstances cooperation is as equal vital as competition.
First of all, competing mentality makes people work harder and harder, and surpass all his peers to go at the top. And this mentality is needed to make the manpower of a society more skilled and hungry for success. For example, all the examinations that are held in the country are competitive and the exams for the most demanding jobs are even more competitive. In any work environment there is competition between the employees for getting a promotion. As the country cannot provide the same job to all the candidates, the company cannot promote all its employees at once. Because of this, competition is inborn between the students as well as the employees for achieving their goal. And doing so, the company gets the more skilled and hard working person in the upper management position and the country gets the more meritorious student to come work for the most demanding job field ensuring a better leader for the next generation.
Secondly, if there is no competition among the candidates, it is highly unlikely that one is going to find the perfect leader among those candidates. If we randomly assign someone as the leader of a country its not going to bring good results at all. That is why, in selecting a leader for the government, there is always competition in the name of election. The candidates have to work on their moral character as well as people skill and be better than the other competing candidate to draw attention of the citizens of the country and prevail in the election. In addition, without any examination if we promote the students to the next class, it is dubious that they will study at all now. Because of the free promotion, they will be more congent to amuse themselves in other works. Therefore, an election provides a chance for choosing a better leader by making the leaders compete among themselves and an exam finds out the elligible student to have promoted into the next class.
However, cooperation is also needed. In some case people need to be able to distinguish between their own team members than other. For instance, a successful movement will only occur when there is cooperation between the protesters. If they start to compete themselves, the protest will perish inevitably. So, youth should be also taught about the manners of cooperation as well so that when they are under the perfect leader they should listen to his advice and act accordingly. In short, a person should understand when to compete or with whom to compete as well as when it is time to cooperate also.
In colclusion, society neeeds competitions to create better leaders by forcing them to develop their character in the process. But they should also be taught about the virtue of cooepration by disregarding own self interest when the time comes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... better leader for the next generation. Secondly, if there is no compet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2667.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89357798165 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74058918023 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451376146789 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0809502792 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.576923077 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9615384615 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218475529142 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660482832512 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579819303847 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12051864706 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479558991222 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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