The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
leadership quality is a great requirement for success in government, industry or any other field. A very important attribute of a good leader is the ability to work in cooperation with his teammate. while competition might be a good way to challenge oneslf, it could also be bad. it is necessary for societies to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other feilds by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition because of the following reasons.
cooperation rather than competition produce better results, because everybody wil see themselves as teammates, this will make everybody to work together to produce the best results. Every team member will put heads together to share ideas and find solutions to problems. leadership is all about the ability to work with others to produce the best results.
also no body has it all, this means that there are some qualities that an individual will have that the leader of the team will not have, For example a president of a nation has so many advicers that advises him on different issues in order to make the best decision that will benefit the citizens of that nation. The president will need a professional in health to advise him on issues that has to do with health, he will also need an expect in women and gender issues to advise him on issues that has to to with women. No matter how intelligent the president is, he needs the help and cooperation of other experts to run a successful governement.
it might be argued that competition increases effienciency, while this is true, it is important to control it and know when to capitulate to produce the best results.
In conclusion, instilling cooperation instead of competition in young people for leadership in government, industry, and other fields is very important as it has proven to provide durable and better results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rovide durable and better results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95911949686 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85561776613 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8958553825 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223996931931 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959483422688 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11234459572 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140853988772 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116907127958 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.