The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Young people have to prepare themselves in various ways when they become older and getting involved more and more in society. They learn how to discuss with each other, learn how to work together and they also learn what leadership is. By preparing our future leaders it is necessary to learn them how to cooperate but even more important to get involved in competition.
First of all, competition triggered young people to develop themselves. Through competition people use their qualities the most efficient way. Contrary, cooperation could lead to a lazy attitude because people hope that other group members will do the work. If others are doing the work there is no need to develop for that particular individual. Competition could lead to progress in self-esteem because results are achieved individually, contrary to cooperation where results are always achieved by different persons.
Young people have to become familiar with competitive settings because they also become part of a competitive setting later in their working carrier. Now, they learn what competetion is so they could become familiar with it. If young people instilling only a sense of cooperation, they could be shocked later. This shock could lead to employees which are not able to give directions in an organisation.
Managers, directors and other people who have to be skillful if it comes to leadership do have to be an example for their employees. If a leader does not show competitive behaviour why should employers do than? Competitive attitude is very important if a company wants to achieve their goals.
Nevertheless, Teamwork leads to the best results because people could learn for others and could get help when they are unable to manage a problem.
To conclude, it is very important that young people get involved in a competitive atmosphere. They are triggered to become the best version of themselves and learn to work hard. Because they get involved in competition they do not have to become familiar with it on a later age. However, young people also have to learn to work together and help others but competition have to be a very important part of preparing them for leadership in government, industry, or other fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12054794521 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79268809111 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449315068493 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0362669244 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.45 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180309842519 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629270382676 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533918663822 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101339775145 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231707880926 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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