The author says that the best way to prepare new generation to be leaders in business government or economy is to teach them to cooperation not competition. Although the author forgets that leader is individual men, a man who can do something better than others. There is no way for many leaders. There must be someone individual who leads the rest.
It's hard to imagine business without leading brands that make the best production for consuming demand. Everyone wants buy and use everything high quality. And there only one way to achieve it is the competition. Firms which cannot make the best things just go away. On their places come better firms with better products. If we imagine cooperation instead of competition it would be look like market shared among many companies that cooperating with each other. They would not seek to offer something better than others, instead they would offer something standard than other, because they dialed with each other to cooperate and do not bother to each other. It would stop all economy development.
In order to be the President you must be best, better than your competitors must. If you were not the best so your country would not go for the best possible way of development. But what if we exclude competition in the President race? It would be mean that the head of the government were the men appointed by somebody's cooperated decision.
Leadership without competition is impossible in many spheres such like sport. If you want to win you should struggle with your rivals. The cooperation must be in command sports. But every command should be leaded by one man. The best of the team. And that man have to proof that he is the best. Otherwise the team would not be ready to come for that man. Again its competition.
In wild world life without competition is impossible. And effective cooperation is possible only through competition. The mankind unfortunately also is based on the laws of wild life. And in order to survive its necessary to be competitive able
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...come better firms with better products. If we imagine cooperation instead of compe...
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...ssible in many spheres such like sport. If you want to win you should struggle wit...
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
... man have to proof that he is the best. Otherwise the team would not be ready to come for...
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...fortunately also is based on the laws of wild life. And in order to survive its n...
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...ive its necessary to be competitive able
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87283236994 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66039795222 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4891324497 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2142857143 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.821428571429 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172652973226 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489922130437 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528116495009 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971033448112 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345809817359 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 14.1392134831 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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