The best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Equal parts of cooperation and competition are mandatory leadership qualities for a good leader.
Cooperation within the organization is required to instill a spirit of harmony. Tasks, especially those with deadlines will be completed faster if it is split among group members assigned to the task according to their skillset. Each group member should be able to approach each other and also the leader for help or clarifications, without hesitation. Thus, the talent pool in the group would be efficiently utilised. Working together also helps in putting forth fresher ideas to the table. Making this a competition among themselves would arguably aid in finishing the task faster but would not result in the best results.
A competitive spirit is essential because it provides a drive to perform better. For example, in the run for elections, when parties compete with each other, they try to do their best to understand the needs of the people and develop strategies and policies to solve their problems, in an effort to convince the people to vote for them and not the opposing party. The Opposition party to the Ruling Party in a government would analyse and point out flaws in the ruling party's legislations in the spirit of competition and it would help in the inception of better and more efficient laws and policies. Similarly, competition amongst companies is important as it drives each company to set high targets and work towards achieving them, in order to beat their competition. Thus, they end up performing better than they would if they didn't have a competitor. The idea of competitive exams were similarly put forth to drive students to work harder and put in their level best effort to beat the competition. It helps institutions filter out the best candidates who have it in them to work hard and hence produce results.
But, it is essential to point out that the competition should be healthy. For example, if one company spies on the other, in order to glean their secrets, it is not indicative of a healthy competition. It would eventually sabotage the performance of both companies, as opposed to how they would have performed if they had engaged in healthy competition. Similarly, a student cheating on an exam is one who hasn't understood the benefits of the spirit of healthy competition, choosing to take tht supposed easy way out.
Finally, it is important to note that the world is increasingly becoming a battlefield with "survival of the fittest", with rapid-paces developments in each and every field. In such a situation, it is important to keep calm and retain equal parts of cooperation and competition in the right spirit for success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'level the best'.
Suggestion: level the best
...tudents to work harder and put in their level best effort to beat the competition. It help...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... student cheating on an exam is one who hasnt understood the benefits of the spirit o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, similarly, so, still, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05156950673 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93769294103 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8664514982 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.65 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187170629485 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544335616228 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566886896934 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108234045262 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433179915607 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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