The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In today's world were every one wants to be a leader, there are only some who actually knows the meaning of being a leader. Leadership comes with great responsibilities. Leadership qualities owns by a person are not which can be gained merely by heavy reading books, scoring top grades in exams or bulling others to follow him. Our society should focus on preparing its young generation for leadership in different fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not the competition.
For instance, history has given us so many renowned leaders. Rani Laxmi Bai, Mahatma Ghandi etc are the well known leaders know for there heroic acts. They have surrendered themselves for the benifit and the welfare of others. In current society, students at their tender age are forced to follow the race, the race of being the academics, in sports, in cultural etc. But, what they should be taught is the manganaminousity, cooperativeness for others.
However, a leader is for its people, not for himself. Our educational, government, industry and other fields are developing the quality of being superior to others. In every field, people are taking credits of others work and blaming others for their mistakes. Instead of deceiving the people for there momentary gain, leaders should be the one guiding them for their betterment. A leader can only guide if he himself is eschew and above the greed for the recognition.
Moreover, a good leader is the one who develops the quality of teamwork within its followers. A good leader is the one who takes credit for the people mistake and gives them the credit for the success he make. A leader is for the people, by the people just like our government. Today, even the leaders of the political party ruling us are not supportive of the citizen of their country. Once they are able to receive the votes from the citizens, they neglect both them and there needs.
Thus, being a member of a society, we should help our country in becoming a better place. Electing better people as our leader will only help in our surroundings to grow. A better today can only promise a better tomorrow for our society. We should let children focus more on the welfare of mankind rather than going at the top by destroying others in the way. We can be a better leaders ourselves by proving a better path to our younger generation.
In conclusion, I strongly support the idea of our society to prepare its people by instilling in them a sence of cooperation rather than the competition. A cooperative society can help each other to grow and support each other in difficult times. Every wants to be the leader but, a leader is voted by the people. It is the people who decides there leader and the one with a generous heart is always chosen above the one who is greedy about the thrown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eschewed'.
Suggestion: eschewed
... leader can only guide if he himself is eschew and above the greed for the recognition...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ives them the credit for the success he make. A leader is for the people, by the peo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76278118609 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63691579041 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478527607362 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7616744057 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.1785714286 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4642857143 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326358406231 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969067566006 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112254497267 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180959053207 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896868706214 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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