The best way for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government , industry or other fieldsis by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

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The best way for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government , industry or other fields
is by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Undoubtedly,the young generation of the society are the most valuble members ,since they are responsible for renovating the structures of the community in the future,however it is mandatory for them to be completely prepared for this harsh situation with the help and advices from well-informed people like their mentors.In my point of view,it is up to the educational centres to train the juveniles in a cooperative atmosphere inorder to achieve to the success although compiting with the other pupils should not be easily under rated.

First of all,it is true that the youngsters are always keen to learn various fields or it is better to say that they are somehow ambitious.by considering this innate feeling,the tutors and parents can utilize this sence to make them more fastidious in cooperating with the other persons in the same age.It is outright that they can transfer the experiences which have been gained to each other immediately and as a resultant ,their knowledge can be heightened.

Secondly,a collegial atmosphere can gives the young people this oppurtunity to defer regarding various aspects of the life such as edecation,fiscal challenges,politics and... .this can bring about myriad of fruitful advantages which may alter their shape of life style,as most of them are not leading suitable life style in many of their habbits ,and with the help of each other they might be able to rehabilitate some of the negative attributes of themselves.

On the other hand,that would be much beneficial for them to undergo a novel and stressful condition like compiting .the reason behind this is that it can help them to improve, and develope their competence and efficiency for tough situations ,otherwise they can not be an appropriate choice for taking the responsibility of the organ,city,state and.. .The key point here is that they have to be careful about their
manner and behaviour during this process.In the other words being unpretentious is always recommended and it is up to the teachers to teach them having a humbleness in the life can makes you a respectful rival ,regardless of the outcome ,so that could be solutary for both society and an individual.

In brief,the young students have a vital role in the future ,and of course they need a combination of different advices from adept people in addition to gain exhaustive knowledge concerning various fields of studies.they should figure out how to solve problems lonely or with the contribution of their coworkers

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in brief, of course, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18765432099 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07207927742 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535802469136 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.236123202 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 300.142857143 118.986275619 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.8571428571 23.4991977007 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.21951772744 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179413615736 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914100981963 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606473883505 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100265490489 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570407614018 0.0667264976115 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 14.1392134831 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 48.8420337079 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.38706741573 132% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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