The best way for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government , industry or other fieldsis by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

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The best way for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government , industry or other fields
is by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Young people are the future of the society and for any society or organisation to succeed they must have a good
leader. So by preparing young people for leadership role by instilling in them the sense of cooperation will serve
as a fantastic quality for both the organisation and its people, but competition is also equally important for the
individuals to perform well. Here I will disagree with the author's claim that competition is not necessary.

In order to achieve great heights one must have a goal and he must work hard to protect it and achieve it, if there
in no competition then there is no need to protect it as no one else is there to achieve it. And so young individuals
may not realise its importance and nor they will feel the need to work hard for it. It is likely that in such scenario
anyone will tend to become lazy and start delaying the things. So healthy competition is very necessary in order
to keep individuals self motivated and focused. It will instil them the feeling of self awareness and the necessity
to work for their aim or role.

Suppose we have taught our young generation how to work in a team and how to cooperation but until and
unless healthy competition is not there they many not feel the zealous energy work for it. If healthy competition
is present among them and one person achieves a goal then it not only increase confidence of that individual but
will also motivate others to achieve similar heights. As per the Steve jobs Biography when Steve jobs had
founded apple, at that time bill gates was still finding an idea to open his company to do something different. Till
then Bill was not aware of Steve's company or his idea and so he was working casually but the moment Apple
company hit the market and rose exponentially, this gave Bill gates goosebumps and a sense of competition
motivated him to do something more. It was the result of competition that pushed him so much and now we all
can see how much he has achieved.

Thus, competition plays a major role among individual in order to achieve or excel in something. Cooperation is
also necessary but the combination of Healthy competition and cooperation play a vital role for any
organisation or individual growth.

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... company to do something different. Till then Bill was not aware of Steves compan...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224096385542 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.168674698795 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0698795180723 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0771084337349 0.0497285424764 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0746987951807 0.0444667217837 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0987951807229 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0192771084337 0.0406280797675 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.67465209325 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409638554217 0.030933414821 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0843373493976 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0265060240964 0.0249443105267 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00963855421687 0.0148568991511 65% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2268.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 395.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7417721519 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275949367089 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230379746835 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141772151899 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118987341772 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67465209325 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46835443038 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.0567279236 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 26.3333333333 23.380412469 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.936516982 59.4972553346 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.2 141.124799967 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 23.380412469 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.94800884956 445% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.3713080169 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.06766917293 1.64882698954 65% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365842087375 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130395053466 0.123202303941 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759051338997 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.732977872181 0.547984918172 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.282997297359 0.149214159877 190% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161826737026 0.161403998019 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100874560137 0.0892212321368 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.11048650578 0.385218514788 29% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0820801437213 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134420710072 0.275328986314 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906584824273 0.0653680567796 139% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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