The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Preparing young people for leadership roles is an important task for the development of the society. The claim states that the best way for a society to perpare its young people for leadership roles is by instilling a sense of cooperation in them. Yes, cooperation is the way to go for a better society. However, some healthy competition helps in achieving a goal quicker. The following three paragraphs explain why I mostly agree with the claim.
To Begin with, as a field gets complex and convoluted, cooperation becomes a necessity. For instance, as we are living in the age of software, the mechanism and procedures to create software and related programs has become so complex that cooperation is inevitable to stay persistent in the market. Recently, Google and Apple who were always on the nose with each other made a collaborative effort in improving the privacy of their customer. This shows that even the big names in the industry can't survive without a cooperation in the ever growing and booming fields. Thus, if we try to instill a sense of cooperation in young people, a major daunting task can be met more effectively.
In the same sense, cooperation among political parties and industrial companies leads to lesser headache and disputes, and their energy is well spent on something which is more significant. Reflecting on the past we see that Political Parties were trying to sway people's opinion by exposing the scams of the the rival parties. Hence, the resources were spent more on competing with each other rather than on resolving much bigger and imperative issues like Global Warming. If the sense of cooperation is instilled in the youth, major issues will be addressed rather than futile competition.
Having said that, healthy competition can bring a rapid development of a product and helps in dissolving the monopoly. For example, Intel was the only manufacturer of processor before AMD took their shot. During that period, the price of Intel chips skyrocketed and innovation and development of the chips slowed down. This monopoly was shattered by arrival of AMD with their affordable as well as unique processor designs. Since, then both companies are in healthy competition with each other and development of newer chips is rapid. Hence, a healthy competition can always help the society.
Thus, the only cooperating might not be helpful for a society and some form of competition should be present to keep the ball rolling. Hence, the claim at hand is complex and has a fuzzy characteristic to it. So, instill cooperation in the young people but also keep space for some competition for the betterment of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05442176871 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83083122813 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514739229025 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7433878584 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9130434783 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1739130435 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213923375496 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617415408691 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088856257043 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12439667475 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10242090066 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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