"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A strong society is formed not by a single person but by a group of people from various cultural backgrounds. The young generation has to be trained in a way that would allow them to collaborate with others and move forward.
Teamwork is the main aspect that young people have to be enlighted. Working as a team member would make a person to listen to what others have to offer and also would allow putting forward their point. The better the person is as a team member the best he would become a team leader. For example, in the current, It sector people are divided as a team to work on various projects. A team leader is chosen based on his performance and the way he works with his co-persons. Cooperating and working with others would make a person a better leader.
A leader should have the ability to decide what is better for the people under him. A politician or a government leader before passing a law should analyze how it would reach his people. For a better analysis of the law considering the views of various people is necessary. A leader should know how it would reach the poor and also the rich. So taking into consideration of other points of view a leader can decide the best. This can be possible only by cooperating with them.
In addition to the above, the most essential quality of a leader is collaborating all the thoughts and deciding which one would be better. To collaborate, cooperation is quite important. By getting views and opinions of the team a leader can jot down and decide. A thought expressed by a team member could once be more influential than from the leader. So listening to the team is one of the essential qualities a leader should possess.
Competition is more necessary in today's world but cooperating and collaborating with others would help the young generation to learn and grow more.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65853658537 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64322059429 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460365853659 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2190770242 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973175208739 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361556563225 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323007237791 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630313829635 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316111705534 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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