The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
From the dawn of human civilization, humans rely on each other for completing tasks and important issues. It can't be gainsaid that people need each other to be successful. The best way to raise children in early-stage and prepare them for adulthood is to teach them how to be cooperative.
First of all, we are living in an age in which cooperation plays a significant role as far as the development of a nation is concerned. In today's modern world, efficiency and success rely on cooperation. It doesn't matter that one is a governer or a chief of a high-tech company, as long as she or he is in cooperation with others, she or he will be successful.
Secondly, cooperation makes it easier to use every talent and every people with different potential. For instance, imagine a person that is a leader of an industrial company. She recently found out that the annual profit of the company is decreasing and although she tried to figure out the problem, she couldn't find out. Finally, as she knew that she needed the help of her employee, so she asked them and at the end, as one of her employees told her, she was aware that the problem is that they need better air conditioners in their workspace. As you can see, with cooperating with her employees, she found out the problem within her company.
Lastly, it can be said that although competition has a lot of positive aspects, it can't be good to raise someone that wants to be a leader with a sense of competition. Competition makes people more challenging and they might get so competitive that it can built a sense of envy and jealousy in them. Needless to say that no factory, company or even country doesn't need this type of person for leadership.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that cooperation cause success and efficiency. This is because with cooperation a leader can use her or his resources more efficiency and uses every talent and potential in the group. Competition, on the other hand, makes people more jealous and it might get their mind out of the cardinal aim.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68232044199 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78030680297 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4029840965 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132483537303 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453095390989 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421985293306 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755865977555 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492730946214 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.