Life is all about having perfect balance of two different things. Likewise, a right amount of co-operation and competativeness together makes a true leader. A leader cannot succeed untill and unless he knows how to manage his/ her team. Management comes from sense of co-operation. With right amount of competativeness he/she can maintain a study growth.
First and for most thought, one will come across upon hearing the term leadership is balancing mind. A true leader will have sense of co-operation and will maintain a study growth by enforcing a healthy competition between the team member. As we already know human beings are most dependable animals in nature. We exist in nature by helping each other. Without co-operation a man can not survive. That is the basic quality of a leader.
Apart from that to maintain a growth and have a purposefull life one should imbibe competativeness. Without competation one cannot grow. A leader should encourage a healthy competition among his/her disciples to maintain a overall growth of the team. Let's take an example of cricket. Like any other game in Cricket team won't be victorious unless all members of the team perform well. A right balance of batting, bowling and fielding will make a good team. To balance the team captain should know how to use team member's talent suitably.
Lastly, I want to mention about how Mahatma Gandhi prevailed over British Empire by his leadership qualities. He was very well known for his non-violance methods. He set an example how co-operation between his disciples did a wonder in Freedom Fighting.
In conclusion, I like to say that society should try to instill co-operation and competation in right amount in young people to prepare them as a leader in various fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are them as a leader in various fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, likewise, so, still, well, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06164383562 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87763357721 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.57952865 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959866073299 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258734849627 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430468078816 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676334904156 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593452456959 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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