The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Every human being wants to be the best in most of the aspect of life. We see kids competing each other during school years, college life and then with colleagues in offices and neighbours and even friends. But does competition leads to a healthy life and successful career???. This is a debate. I am of the opinion that a sense of coöperation is needed for a successful career and life. Although the competition is also needed but the nature of competiveness must be healthy in every sence.
There is a short documentary on youtube which deals with the two american superstars- Arnold and Sylvester. Both of them were at the top of their careers in the 90's. They made great movies and won plenty of awards. Yet both of them were always unhappy with other's success. They had a bitter competition in them. And slowly their careers and personal life started to suffer. They were not getting many movies which lead to depression. Now in their old age they have become best friends. They now state that if we had a healthy compition in between us we would have achieved so much more. If we were not jealous and bitter about one another we would have learned for each other and made even more successful movies.
Remember Mussolini the dominant ruler of Italy. When he came to power he promised people a prosperous and wealthy country. He even worked on his promises for some time. Although the hunger for becoming the world ruler led to his death. He wanted to be the best ruler of the world. He enaged into many wars for which his country was devoid of resources and man power. The country showly desended to poverty and hunger. His own people were so frustrated that they killed him and hanged his body on the road. The people even beatup his dead body and spitted on it. Thus, we see that excessive hunger to be the best leader can lead to horrible consequences.
In my opinion any country developing or developed can make tremendous development if and only if the leaders of the country work in a coperative environment. If all the decisions in parliment are debated by the opposition for self gain and not for the advancement of nation then the common people suffer.
Thus, to conclude I state that for the young to be successful leaders they must have a sence of cooperation with competitors in them. They can compete with each other , although the comptiton must be healthy which will lead to development of organization and also one self.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n them. They can compete with each other , although the comptiton must be healthy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6797235023 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53063042908 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497695852535 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9426858577 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156501377937 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410190489701 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424244726764 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875388970221 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169458515834 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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