Leadership in government, industry or other fields requires skills that are not so common. These skills are not instilled in a person through cooperation. They are learned by competing among their peers. Cooperation is necessary for the growth of an organization, whereas competition is important for personal growth. Leaders must showcase their skills learned by competing to prove they are better than their peers and better suited for leading.
Competition is necessary for human society in today's world, without which, there is no sense in performing extraordinarily. No sense of competition leads to an acceptance of mediocrity in every field. When a person is working in a team to achieve a particular common goal, cooperation is definitely beneficial. But if the person cares about his own life goals and aspirations, competition is crucial for achieving them. The society must maintain a balance between the two while preparing young people for leadership.
Whenever there is a lack of competition, there comes a lack of motivation. If people are not competing to outshine, there is no need to work hard. In schools, it will be sufficient for everyone to pass each class by getting just passing marks. In colleges, taking up basic and easiest subjects and passing the same way will be standard. In jobs, getting the job done on the date of the deadline in a non-impressive manner will be accepted. There will be no sense of awards or promotions. No competition will lead to a dull life. So the focus of society should also be to promote healthy competition.
Life gets its aim and aspirations through competition. Getting ahead of one's peers provides oneself confidence and a feeling of satisfaction. Competition is a crucial part of evolution of not only humanity but of every other species in this world.
While preparing young people for leadership, society must instill in them a balanced sense of cooperation and competition. But it should also make sure that the youth understands the importance of healthy competition. After all, a life without anything to compete for will be absolutely morose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... passing the same way will be standard. In jobs, getting the job done on the date ...
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...s through competition. Getting ahead of ones peers provides oneself confidence and a...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15362318841 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02407340417 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6204169452 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226267636093 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628783669134 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721705840359 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128574065574 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069703178876 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.