The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The assertion claims that the young people of the society should be prepared for leadership with a sense of cooperation and not competition. while choosing between cooperation and competition , none of the two would possibly burn out the other as both have a significant role in leadership. The assertion could be agreed to some extent while considering competition as a vital element in leadership.
competition and cooperation are the two most vital element while preparing a society for leadership. where both of the elements have their own role in leadership, they are often considered as opposites. The best way for approaching leadership would be somehow a combination of both the elements where none of them nullify each other’s role.
For example, in government field, the ruler of the nation must be cooperative with his team while making any major decision regarding the nation's future. Moreover, the ruling party is more accepted by the nation when they are elected democratically by the public's participation which is a sign of cooperation. but competitive approach with the rival party keeps the ruling team on track as they cannot practice autocracy in the name of ruling as the rivals would replace them with the support of the nation.
Another example from industry would help evaluating the position. The head of the industry must be cooperative with the assistants and the employees of the industry to keep the growth incessant. unless there is a healthy environment, the industry is bound to fall causing a hostile situation among the members of the industry. At the same time, a healthy competition among the employees would bring out the best of the candidates while promoting to a higher position.
In conclusion, cooperation without competition is viable to some extent while practicing leadership. but unless a healthy competition is not instilled among the young people of the society, the best of them would not come out. A fine combination of competition and cooperation would be the best way to be instilled in the young people while preparing for leadership.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ile preparing a society for leadership. where both of the elements have their own rol...
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...e of them nullify each other’s role. For example, in government field, the ru...
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... they are elected democratically by the publics participation which is a sign of cooper...
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...ipation which is a sign of cooperation. but competitive approach with the rival par...
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...them with the support of the nation. Another example from industry would help...
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...hile promoting to a higher position. In conclusion, cooperation without compe...
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...ome extent while practicing leadership. but unless a healthy competition is not ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23235294118 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97856857013 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458823529412 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3041699251 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.1875 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305524844902 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11221717795 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821859898958 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180123202602 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848936973755 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.