The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Young people are often said to be the leaders of tomorrow. Indeed, they demonstrate strength, vigour and zeal, which if not put in the right use, may disrupt the society. The prompt suggests that society should prepare its young people by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the prompt and argue that cooperation and not competition should be taught to the youth as it enhances growth and takes away cultural differences.
First, cooperation encourages growth. When cooperation exists within a group of people, it brings to the table versatility and then a proper division of Labour. In the industry today, people from various field are required to perform a task. For example, in the manufacturing industry, the engineers are needed, the accountants are needed, the lawyers are needed, and each of the group will be bringing a substantial amount of knowledge. Therefore, for young people to be properly prepared for leadership, unity must be encouraged.
Furthermore, cooperation brings diversity and takes away the cultural difference. When the youths of the country see themselves as one and not division, it is only then that they can handle leadership positions better. Take for instance, in Nigeria here, the youths are divided among three geographical regions and hence strife better the regions is prevalent. Hence, we can only build up the youths for leadership positions when cultural differences put to the low, or at best eliminated.
On the other hand, encouraging healthy competition amongst the youth is also a good way of developing them. Healthy competition brings builds one's capacity to focus and trains one in being determined. Competition in sporting activities has been seen to as well build unity. This must, however, be done without strife or ulterior motives. Hence the call for cooperation.
Cooperation is the key to developing leaders. Our youths must be taught how to cooperate. This will cause the society to flourish. It also limits the negatives can are present in cultural variance. A society that wants the best for its youth must organise annual orientation programs on cooperation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is
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...them. Healthy competition brings builds ones capacity to focus and trains one in bei...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...one without strife or ulterior motives. Hence the call for cooperation. Cooperatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23295454545 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8947567216 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1671083427 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0869565217 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251348200575 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660779925162 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645113280001 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129829876711 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466944395569 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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