The Best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
It is widely beleived that, for a country to exist, all of its people should have a common identity. This concept of having a common identity creates a sense of belonging among the people. It is this sense of belonging that makes a piece of land and many groups of people, a nation.
If the goverment encourages the competition in social aspects of life, it may lead to disastorous consequences. For example, extreme competition among young citizens of a nation or inter community competition may lead to groupism, which may lead to civil war like situations. This is because, when one group or a person tries to be overly competitive, it may undermine interests of other people, thus, causing conflict of interests.
The same is also true for an organization or industry. In case of extreme competition, the industry of company may end up harming interests of the workers involved in the industries. In some cases it may also lead to corruption. Fo example, if two or more employees compete for same position in the company, some may end up bribing the concerned officials to get the position. In this case, the sence of competition within the company may harm the overall leadership of the compny in the long run.
In some situations competition might be advantagous for a particular group of people. Consider a competition among companies which offer similar products, in this case the competition may end up being advantegous to the customer, as he/she may get a better quality product at a lower prices.
Cooperation becomes important in case of leadership roles, this is because, all people don't have same type of qualities and same kind of approach towards the society. In this case cooperation among people responsible for, say, a decision of product developement can take steps which appeal to a larger section of society. In case of goverments, collaboration and cooperation among political leaders becomes important for a country's developement and for the good of its citizens.
To conclude, I would say that a sense of belonging and cooperation becomes very important when considering leadership roles, weather it is a company or government. Collaboration improves overall decision making process, thus, avoidiong conflict of interest situations. Tis leads to prosperity of a nation, company or any other institution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'situations'' or 'situation's'?
Suggestion: situations'; situation's
...the compny in the long run. In some situations competition might be advantagous for a ...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ship roles, this is because, all people dont have same type of qualities and same ki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, for example, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1387434555 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04510129933 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489528795812 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1715924918 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.315789474 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211055627302 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685771316171 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482996469249 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109255369913 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340044977178 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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