"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The current young people will the future's leader. Therefore, it is necessary to prepare them for the leadership from their young age. The given prompt suggests that instilling the sense of cooperation in young people's for leadership is the best way to prepare them for leadership. I strongly concur with the given prompt because of the following reasons.
Firstly, history is replete with examples where leaders with the ability to cooperate with people with disparate views have been able to create landmarks. For example, Nelson Mandela being the first black president of South America did not compete with his white rivals; in fact, he was able to unite the black and white people by cooperating with both of them. He was a medium to ravage the wall of prejudice. In this way, the proclivity of a leader to cooperate not only builds up an ambivalent working environment it also prevents the unwanted antipathy that competition may bring.Young people being the future of the world should be directed towards such path where they learn to cooperate rather than to compete. Society should instill the quality of cooperation in the young people so that in future they will be able to be a cooperative leader. Cooperative person will be able to avoid unnecessary disputes by handling and addressing disparate opinions and thereby will be an effective leader.
Secondly, one who has the ability to cooperate will be wiling to listen to other people's opinions and such tendency might help to bring more ideas and ultimately, better outcomes. For example, in an industry, a leader who tends to cooperate with the local will be aware of the environmental problems that his or her industry may lead to. In this way, he will be alert beforehand and will be perform better. Also, rather than competiting with the similar industries if the leader tends to cooperate he or she might be come to know about the different problem that the other industries had to face in future. A cooperative person will be able to gain wide insight in any field. Therefore, also for a leader tendency to cooperate is very necessary.
Admittedly, in order to gain leadership, there might be conditions where competition will be inevitable. In such scenario as well, a cooperative person will be able to stand out because he or she will be willing be listening to the rivals' opinions and will be learning from different aspects. A child who is grown only with a focus to compete might not develop such level of listening ability. Therefore, by instilling the sense of cooperation, the child will itself be competent and may become a leader in his or her field. Moreover, will also perform better as a leader.
Therefore, in order to develop the ability to understand other's opinion and learn from them it is necessary to instill sense of cooperation in the young people to make them a better leader in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'futures'' or 'future's'?
Suggestion: futures'; future's
The current young people will the futures leader. Therefore, it is necessary to p...
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Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Young
...ed antipathy that competition may bring.Young people being the future of the world sh...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er who tends to cooperate with the local will be aware of the environmental probl...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...m that the other industries had to face in future. A cooperative person will be able to g...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ling be listening to the rivals opinions and will be learning from different aspe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87983706721 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69715752685 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429735234216 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0779094434 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3181818182 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184298719363 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787816065598 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897198480698 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152506926554 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918299863641 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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