"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
'We are stronger together', as this proverb rightly explains that working together and in cohesion we can climb the toughest mountains. A good leader is not someone who can complete the task all by himself but is one who can make his team work together to give efficient results. The youth of the nation is going to be the future of the nation, and training them from day one will only result in the positivity. The above prompt says cooperation is the key for sustainance of a good leadership and I fairly agree with this.
To begin with, a little competition in any field is good as it gives the people of the organisation the spark to be more ambitious. A healthy competition always leads to development of an individual. For instance , let's take a look at a professional football team, to get selected in the playing eleven of the team you need to give your best in training and need to be a little competitive of your peers. But the real match is the place where you showcase your coherence and cooperation in the team. The match can only be won if there is a sense of helping your teamate to bring the best of themselves in the team.
Moreover, values inculcated in children at a smaller age shapes their future. Thus, imbibing good values in them at smaller age will be helpful to their future. Cooperation being one of the key values should be instilled in the children. Suppose, when a child in school is involved with a few other children in a group project, every child needs to be taught to work in unison with other and make sure that no one is getting left out. They are making a solar system model as their project then if the decide together what part suits them the most it will bring out the best of their creativity instead of focusing on competing with their teammate for whose work is better.
However we know that our society is a important factor that comes into play. In today's world being a lone wolf is not possible, for work almost everyone is dependent on everyone, even the best of the best need help from others in their field. For this system to work smoothly there needs to be a sense of cooperation among individuals in a field. In an office if one of the staff member has to go somewhere or leave due to an emergency, cooperation from other people in the office and taking up his part of the work will the best example of cooperation.
Thus a conclusion can be made that a fine balance between cooperation and competition needs to be maintained for a healthy society. A cooperative enviornment will be make it smooth for everyone to work in unison and a healthy competition will bring out the best of an individual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...velopment of an individual. For instance , lets take a look at a professional foot...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r system model as their project then if the decide together what part suits them the most ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... teammate for whose work is better. However we know that our society is a important...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... However we know that our society is a important factor that comes into play. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ll the best example of cooperation. Thus a conclusion can be made that a fine ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, thus, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49380165289 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58389593971 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471074380165 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1036381161 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223228378507 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730129463375 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543335391799 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13527391975 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559376517188 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.