The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The art of leading a group of people, whether it is small like a little office or big like a whole country, has always been a very demanding job. There are many different approaches on how to prepare young people to be good leaders in the future, but the one that works the best is surely the approach that instill and values a sense of cooperation between them. Competition has its positives sides of course, but its negatives outweigh the pros by too much.
First of all, making people cooperate gives them a sense of responsibility that competition lacks in instilling them. People that grow cooperating with their colleagues or friends are more likely to accept a leading role with responsibility. This has to do with the fact that they did not win a competition, they instead got to this position with the help of other people among them. The leader of a country should not feel he won the competition that makes him able to act without responsibility since he or she did not need the help of anybody. He or she should be proud of them and also of the people that made them to reach their position.
Having confidence with a cooperative ambient also gives people the ability to listen to others' opinions without feeling the need to prevaricate them with theirs. A chief of a business should be open to his or her colleagues' opinions if he or she wants to minimize the possibility of making errors that could damage the company, so listening to others is very important in these roles.
Another important aspect of cooperation is the fact that it guarantees that people in charge gets helped by others, since while they do not see others as enemies, also people around them are prone to do so. This whole process guarantees that leaders get more help from their colleagues. That is of vital importance for some countries' leaders who need to get advises from people with knowledge about strategic topics that they, as leaders, lack.
Someone could argue that competition is a stimulus for the spark of better people and ideas, but, as i said before, there are many downsides of this approach. A leader that knows only competition will not be able to listen to other people's opinions and will get less help in change. Leaders brought up with competition will not have the responsibility that only a cooperative ambient can give, thus making them prone to act in inappropriate ways that can damage the organization they are managing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ys been a very demanding job. There are many different approaches on how to prepare young peop...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ark of better people and ideas, but, as i said before, there are many downsides o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7441314554 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65651895324 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488262910798 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8541171813 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3125 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194031290932 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721042403359 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545234422949 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112398967797 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338793179421 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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