The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, and not competition.
The youth of a society are its future. There is a stupendous amount of energy in the youth that can be channelled to various aspects of life such as military, science, industry and government. When a large section of the youth of a particular society are not ready for leadership roles in these aspects of life, such a society risk being colonised by an external power.
Granted, leadership demands many desirable characteristics such as honesty, empathy, personal sense of responsibility (PSR), willingness to sacrifice for others, competitive mind and cooperation. These characteristics are demanded at varying degrees in diffeerent circumstances.
For example, scientist collaborate in order to complete a research work. In fact, the quality of a research paper is usually determined by its interdisciplinary approach. In such a scenerio, it will be inappropriate to compete with other member of the research team. Many reputable journals such as nature always require that collaborating scientist declare no conflict of interest. If that happens, such a work may not be published and the society may lose the opportuinity of reaping from the results of such a research work. Thus a sense of cooperation is required to lead in the scenerio described above.
Furthermore, leadership demands a competitive mind when there is a need to execute a task as soon as possible. For example, there are numerous science competitions that are organised to identify the best minds in a society. In such a scenerio, the society is instilling a competitive mind in its youth in order to force them to think at a cerebral level and provide solutions or answers to the most difficult problems in the society.
Thus, in conlusion, it is wrong to assert that the sense of cooperation is the best method of preparing the youth of a society for leadership in different walks of life. Leadership demands all forms of desirable characteristics which include a sense of cooperation and a competitive mind where appropriate.
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- From a letter to the editor of a city newspaper One recent research study has indicated that many adolescents need more sleep than they are getting and another study has shown that many high school students in our city are actually dissatisfied with their 68
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19384615385 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26576793981 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0233890946 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29005439445 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930933405184 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723493391293 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164821738999 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748475476777 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.