the best way for a society to prepare the young ones for leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling them the sense of cooperation not competition.
The above topic represents that the younger generation should be filled up with the values of harmony and cooperation, rather than competition. The introduction of the upcoming generation with these feelings is helpful as tomorrow would be better than today.
The evidence of the above statement can be seen in every single classroom of nursery class where the first chapter of moral science is helping others. Spending one day in that room and you will understand that if we replace cooperation with the competition then how simple can our lives get. A survey was conducted which has shown that children at the ages of 3-5 years
show
90 percent cooperation with their peers and after every 5 years this value keeps on decreasing by 5 percent.
The results are clear from the above, that the moral values are fading away as children turn into adults which
shows
that the students require more education regarding the moral values and that too which is practical this is the only way by which people understand that being in at a position of a leader means to think for everyone in the group and not just for your own benifit. In a national survey in India it was shown that the people who believe in cooperation have become better leaders as they have understood the meaning of teamwork.
Moreover, to imbibe these values in the younger generation we need to take them to the oldage homes and orphanages so that they understand life from different prespectives. History has numerous times proved the fact that cooperation has led to a peaeful life and competition has led to war.
In a nutshell, the values which we give to our future generations will lead to the type of tomrrow we are going to see we have seen that giving poor values has resulted in corupt leaders now we need to change this by changing the values.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tomorrow would be better than today. The evidence of the above statement can be ...
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Line 13, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to change this by changing the values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76489028213 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52652130655 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3875984496 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801258285866 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305077579498 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325545281411 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340513425974 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348685806149 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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