the best way for society to prepare young people for leadership in government or similar fields is through cooperation, not competition
Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. once said, " A good leader is not who is dynamic in mundane conditions but the one who demonstrates his skills and capabilities in tumultuous situations". Leadership is a skill that is either inborn or has to be cultivated over one's whole life. the author contends that instilling in young people a sense of cooperation is more beneficial than supporting competition. In my opinion, I somewhat agree with this contention and argue that cooperation as well as a healthy sense of competition is beneficial for one's character development for two reasons.
To begin, when two people compete, there is always going to be a winner and a loser. The loser can learn about his mistakes and then do better the next time around. Encouraging such healthy competition from a young age helps young adults prepare for a life that is full of vivid experiences, some of which they would not have been able to experience if they hadn't failed at something. For instance, Maria Sharapova and Serena Williams are both extremely talented and competitive women who have competed multiple times in their careers.
Further, being a leader necessitates donning different hats in different scenarios.A leader in times of economic hardship must be strategic, cogent in his decision making
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, well, as to, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1220657277 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98075113674 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68544600939 0.4932671777 139% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7533474634 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.222222222 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194229878223 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699166945274 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065481887562 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106770588222 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754993145952 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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