The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of men and women that the society chooses its heroes or its role models
Some intellectuals would state that, to understand the social nuances and traits of a society, the best possible way is to observe the characteristics of the role model it chooses, however, I refute the claim. In my opinion the claim is based on a broad generalization and is unlikely to succeed.
Firstly, a society is not a monochrome shade of character. It consists of vivid characters ranging from the eclectic orange to the mysterious grey. Based on a single person, it is ridiculous to characterize the entire society. For instance, consider one of the greatest leaders the world has ever witnessed, Mahatma Gandhi. He was an epitome of peace. It was almost impossible for a common man to stand up to his ideals. Not everyone was like him. If it were the case, he would have never been shot dead. Although, his character was equivalent to one of the most ideal man in a society, he was assassinated by an individual belonging to the same society. This example elucidates the fact that the society can’t be looked from the lens of the hero’s character.
Secondly, heroes share a great responsibility to protect the society from detrimental forces. Seldom these forces are derived from the same society we live in. To illustrate this fact, consider the movie “The Dark Knight”, directed by Christopher Nolan and starring Christian Bale as Batman. The city of Gowtham was so ubiquitous with venal officers and scoundrels, that an individual from the society had to rise and correct its course. Its not that the city had lost all of its honest men, but the grey shade was more prevalent. Again, observing the traits of Batman, who could do anything for the betterment of his city, aren’t a reflection of the traits of the society he belonged.
Thirdly, at times, the society chooses a role model, to keep itself on the path of truth and honesty. It may not necessarily the current characteristic picture, however, it provides the vision for what an ideal society ought to be. In Indian mythology, lord Rama is considered to be the epitome of “Dharma”, the path of enlightenment and salvation. He is worshipped all across the country. He is the mythological superhero, yet the society we live in today is nowhere close to the traits possessed by him.
In a nutshell, a hero is someone who represents the most ideal traits and characteristics a society deserves, but not a reflection of what the society currently is. Hence, it is quite unlikely that social traits of a society can be understood by examining that of its role model.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Seldom' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...ct the society from detrimental forces. Seldom these forces are derived from the same ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ety had to rise and correct its course. Its not that the city had lost all of its h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85091743119 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91971215864 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.719579138 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.44 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30558392861 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683452122885 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713390489675 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160477705104 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672820711605 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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