Both parents and communities should engaged themselves in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.
Both parents and communities should engaged themselves in the local schools, I assertion this statement. In the forthcoming few paragraphs, I will put forward my views why the parents and communities both should engaged in the local schools.
Education is the fundamental right of every citizens and it is of great importance for the development of children. Education can equipped a student to think logically, to develop the rationality inside them. But at the same time, for a child its also necessary to have the socital norms, customs and the children inherited these qualities from their family members. father and mother are the best teacher of a child, besides them every other family members plays vital role in developing a child to be fit for the society. The family members teaches how to behave with outsiders, how to interact with other people etc. On the other hand, the educational institutions are devoted to disseminate the academic learning. The colleges and universities plays significant role in building the society. They give the birth of future scientists, doctors, engineers, philosophers, leaders who plays a pivotal role in building the society. The effectivenss of education system determines the future courses of a nation; how a country will headed in the future, how effectively the economy of the country will perform etc. It is of great importance that both education and other qualities of a child should develop simultaneously. It is a wise saying that the child of today is the leader of tomorrow. Thats why both the education as well as the inner qualities must developed simultaneously and only then the nation can succeed.
Most of the guardians of child think that they have admitted their child in a reputed school/colleges and now they are almost certain that their child will be succeeded. But its a great mistake of them because educational institutions solely can not develop a perfect citizenship for a country. They can facilitate the childs to build the analytical abilities inside them so that they can think rationally. But at the same time its also necessary to have the idea about norms, cultures of the society in which they live and family is the best teacher of teaching these lessons. Thats why Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important so that it should not leave solely to a group of professional educators.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0575 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8975323553 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3145091252 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.15 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291459764805 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103800647672 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158479977623 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246901250416 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137917466908 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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