Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Selecting the place, where we should live is a complicated process and it is also equally important. It’s a vital decision; we all have to take at certain point of time because the future of our life mostly depends on this choice. Some one prefers to live in large city, where there is lots of opportunity to be successful. While other group likes to stay in a small city. I would like to live in a small town for two important reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
The main reason is that we can live a healthy life by living a small town. In small town, we can fresh foods and there is enough space for exercising and taking fresh air. It facilitates the smooth growing of our child. For example, I use to in a small town named Satkhira in my country, where there is no pressure of industrialization. The area is mainly an agrarian based. We can get fresh vegetables, fruits, fishes etc. in abundant. As there is no industrialization, we have enough space for morning walk and for exercising. These assist us to lead a healthier life. As you can see, people living in a mega city like Dhaka have no such kind of facility.
Another reason is that living a small town facilitates us to create strong bondage among our neighbors. As there is no much live in the town, almost every one knows each other. They use to spend time each other, share their thoughts and usually gather in one place at some occasions, which creates a strong bondage among the inhabitants. For instance, in the city, where I live have only two thousands people live and they are familiar with other. We usually meet on our festivals and this has helped to grow a strong bondage among the citizens of the town. Every one comes aside other in case of any difficulties and we are living a calm and peaceful life there. This experience taught me that living a small town has competitive advantages over living in a large cosmopolitan city.
In conclusion, I would like to live in small town. This is s because it not only provides the opportunity to live a healthier life but also it also helps to build strong relationship among the people of the society. Therefore, every one should choose to live in small city if s/he has that scope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52592592593 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6243161991 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476543209877 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0754042459 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.375 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37110362987 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108254006375 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940726758245 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237682440468 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599308443757 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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